You analyse camera work well Olly, and use terminology correctly and fluently. - I think a few of your points are a bit tenuous; I'm not sure a clock shows he is educated?? Or that using a coat for a lead makes him clever?? - Try to vary your examples if you can; don't talk about three props in mise en scene. - Obviously timing is an issue - you have only addressed two out of four areas. Let's see how the extra time makes a difference before we address this. Grade: C-
You analyse camera work well Olly, and use terminology correctly and fluently.
ReplyDelete- I think a few of your points are a bit tenuous; I'm not sure a clock shows he is educated?? Or that using a coat for a lead makes him clever??
- Try to vary your examples if you can; don't talk about three props in mise en scene.
- Obviously timing is an issue - you have only addressed two out of four areas. Let's see how the extra time makes a difference before we address this.
Grade: C-